Do not overstate. When you overstate, the reader will instantly be on guard, and everything that preceded your overstatement, as well as everything that follows it will be suspect in his mind because he has lost confidence in your judgment or your poise. Overstatement is one of the common faults. A single overstatement, wherever or however it occurs, diminishes the whole, and a single carefree superlative has the power to destroy, for the reader, the object of the writer's enthusiasm.(Of course, if I had my way that paragraph would appear at the top of the MeFi front page).
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If someone wants to unpick Bush's reputation, pointing the finger at 'evangelical christians', cabals of shadowy influences and absurdly incorrect phrases such as 'the ruling junta who tell Bush what to say and do', is not going to do it properly.
Sorry, Mr Weinberger, but saying "perhaps one can only recite the facts, and I have mentioned only some of them here" seems awfully fatuous when your article is a series of unproven, paranoid assumptions.
posted by blastboy at 3:04 AM on June 18, 2003