What the hell, these haiku suck. Turns of phrase this phoned in need at leas some Roger Dean artwork. And what kind of name is "Tito (Stephen Henry Gill)?" These are mostly just people describing a thing or a place and sticking the words "cherry blossom" at the beginning or end.
Here's my entry:
Cherry blossomsssss
Tito (Stephen Henry Gill)
Git wang bung bent git posted by Stonestock Relentless at 7:12 PM on March 7, 2008 [2 favorites has favorites]
Girl sits by the creek
floppy-brimmed hat shades her book
blossoms cradles dreams.
Yes, it's seventeen syllables; not true haiku. But then, most of the poems in that link didn't seem to abide by the spirit of haiku, such as I understand it. And yes, it's an imperfect understanding. posted by datawrangler at 8:05 PM on March 7, 2008
"cradles" should be "cradle"
yech/sorry, grammarians.... posted by datawrangler at 8:06 PM on March 7, 2008
drop a bing cherry
into a shot glass; cherry
blossoms into pledge. posted by Bernt Pancreas at 8:34 PM on March 7, 2008
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Here's my entry:
Cherry blossomsssss
Tito (Stephen Henry Gill)
Git wang bung bent git
posted by Stonestock Relentless at 7:12 PM on March 7, 2008 [2 favorites has favorites]