Agriculture Secretary Tom Vilsack has ordered his staff to revise a computerized forecasting model that showed that climate legislation supported by President Obama would make planting trees more lucrative than producing food.We have 3 layers of information here, presented backwards. How about:
The climate legislation supported by President Obama would make planting trees more lucrative than producing food, according to a computerized forecasting model. Agriculture Secretary Tom Vilsack has ordered his staff to revise that model.Despite what they may have told you in journamalism school, periods help understand, they don't impede it.
The American Farm Bureau Federation and some farm-state Republican lawmakers have complained that the offsets program would push landowners to plant trees and terminate their leases with farmers.Ah, I see. We'd just be giving free money to rich people under this scenario.
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posted by Brian B. at 8:00 AM on January 2, 2010