If I’m going to be serious about it, I thought I’d...

What do you think of the first draft of the first page of my memoir? If I’m going to be serious about it, I thought I’d debut it over here and hear what reaction it might receive, although I’m not sure its worthy of anyone’s attention. Still, any advice that you can give me would be highly, highly appreciated. This has been a dream of mine for a long long time, and I think this time I’m going to stick with it and try and crank it out.
posted to Projects by hadjiboy at 8:48 AM on June 12, 2007