In its first draft, the introduction from one of my most struggling students reads like this:While the essay isn't necessarily a great piece on the assigned topic, I think it's the closest I've ever come to understanding the present-day Tea Party movement. Like a Jodorowsky film, the incoherence of the piece transports you to a new conceptual space that resonates with truths that exist outside the boundaries of language.
"The French Revolution was like pan because tea and Americn were like same and John Locke democracia but this make difference because tea party rise of bread costs raise but people revel after they kind no think so this make political and I think but Americans were fight for same as us one day King and slaves were French economica money makes politics win this like Boston tea party and intolerable acts and third estates because life too spency not like normal."
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posted by The Emperor of Ice Cream at 2:27 PM on February 12, 2011